All Comments on '21 Forever'

More please

They should have done it in the shower. Oh well maybe next time

This is not the first story of yours I've read but I wanted to read another to see if I felt the same before I commented. Both stories seem to be written along the same line. I like the way they start out but after that it seems like there's a big rush to get to the sex scene. The dialogues between the characters could be a little better and a little longer and the same goes for the sex scene. They barely get started and it's over.

--D.