Hot story - she's one greedy fucking bitch for cock, just as I like 'em!
Great story, following in your tradition. Can't wait for further episodes.
sis and bro should stay a couple after they both leave for school
I can see that the three of them can have a good time, and perhaps invite their mom,(the ex-wife) for a foursome.
Id like to read about him fucking his sister, and she really loves the way her brother treats her, enough to cause them to have a hot affair.
Wouldn't that give the old man a brain fry if he ever caught the four of them fucking.
Thanks for the good read
Para 1:- 30
para 2:- 36C-23-24, 5'9", 6', 130, 55
para 3:- 6'2"
para 4:- 42
para 5:- 100%
para 6:- 3,9
para 7:- 18, #2
When will writers on this site realise that while the police like a description to include height, weight, and age, that does NOT make a description in literary terms.
While I don't mind anonymous comments, I DO take issue with people using them to gripe and flame their own particular issues - in this case, the way others write.
You don't like the fact that I sometimes use full descriptions of my characters - height, weight and all - don't read my stuff. Period. I am not changing my style of writing to suit you - no writer worth his or her salt ever will.
I don't do it in every story, but I know most readers like to know what a character looks like in their head - and the more detail you add, the more they can picture a character.
Sorry you didn't like the story - most apparently did - so we'll just leave it at that.
your story reads great and i like the detailed descriptions but i wanted to point out that
>> She was still a solid 36C-23-24
should probably be "She was still a solid 36C-23-34", otherwise she has a fairly odd body shape :-)
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