All Comments on 'They Arrive'

"Creamy white with rosebuds at the end"? "While I caressed his member with my tongue and lips"? Have not read that language since I was a kid reading porn by someone named "Anonymous"! The Victorian era is long gone and so, thankfully, is the list of "nice" synonyms for sexual body parts. Cute, but no longer effective as a literary device.

The full power of the language is available to all writers who care to use it. If you don't like "member" instead of "cock", you don't, but that doesn't mean there's something wrong with it.