Breathe

Like McDonald's...

I'm lovin' it!

*****

QMS

A HANG UP REVISITED

for a hang downer. TK U MLJ LV NV

Whoa!

This is the best poem by far, but I am biased. Wow! Please keep writing poetry.

I give this poem two thumbs up!!!

interesting

enjoyed it very much looking forward to reading more by you

This was cool as hell!!!

Liked it-this would be a great spoken word open mic. Get the blood pumping with the right music.

And now, POETRY?!?

You abilities never cease! Keep it up, Kal! Keep it up because I LOVE to keep on reading your stuff!!! WOW!

whoa hell

boring! same ol same ol Lit crap and all those anon raises? Just how many computers do you have access to because less than mediocre poetry like this rarely ever receives an H. so pat yerself on the back and keep voting your crap up but you will always know you were the one that gave yourself the H. blah

whoa hell

What are you so pissed at that you would make an accusation like that?

*****

Five.

Hope

This poem gives hope to all who still wait.

Oh My!!!

This is so lovely and full of promise.

Thanks for the inspiration...

This poem is so reminiscent of a story I wrote a long time ago (not posted) that I recently got a request to write a sequel to. Your poem gave me some inspiration on some directions to take the next chapter of my story. Love your writing. :)

Beautiful

That's all I could say is beautiful!

Minimal words yet deeply moving

Who knew I'd like a poem? This is the first time that I loved a poem enough to make it a "favorite".

I don't usually read poems, but the title, "Breathe", made me curious.

I am amazed that just a few words can make me feel like I've read a long romantic story.

OOOOOOOOOO WOW Please, write more poetry.

This is the best thing I have read in a long time.
I know just how she feels. This poem speaks to me, personally, about what might have been for me. Sadly, for me, there will not be another chance for a happy ending.