All Comments on 'Perfect Night Ch. 03'

That was fabulous! What a great line. Excellent, excellent excellent. Clever dialogue, damn funny situations. I look forward to reading any more of what you submit. You are talented!

Amazing story!!!

I was snorting with laughter when she started screaming while he was on the phone. that whole scene was hilarious with him trying to embarrass her by saying she had stayed the night..the cockroach reference..it was all great!

It's nice to see comedy and red-hot sex go hand in hand.

Congrats on a great story. I loved his caveman attitude when he said - "i got you into my house. I carried you into my room. I tried to seduce you. Now I've taken you. You're mine." It was very sexy. The only thing is I hope this isn't the end. I want to see what happens with them both. Has she just accepted him now or is she still going to be a bit reluctant? I want to know. Please write another chapter!

I can't believe I just read such a romantic story in THIS category. And it really worked for me - it's my favourite. I love your Dor stories too - please write lots.