by Jakey
I appreciate stories like this one. No hard core sex, no unusually long dicks, no marathon sex. Just two people that love and enjoy each other. Really want to read the next part.
That makes the storyline very believable and the characters come alive when reading the story.
Very well done and the writing was excellent.
I certainly want to read more of Lynn and Paul and how their love affair continues to grow to where they can't keep it a secret anymore.
It's too bad that she can't become pregnant, or perhaps she does against all odds.
That would certainly let the cat out of the bag if she did.
Thanks for the very sweet love story...
If she was his real Grandmother, and a genuine 'granny' age difference, then this story would have been perfect.
This is a beautiful love story, where two lonely people had known each other for twenty three years, but their love grew slowly in front of their eyes. The writing was excellent, the timing was perfect, how the author built on the characters.
will they continue fucking, and get her pregnant?
will they try anal?
will they have a 3some, and get both women pregnant?
if they both have children, will they teach them incest, pregnancy?
Such a beautiful love story. I think it's rare to find true love, but when you do, I think it tends to consume you and leaves you powerless. I don't think they will be able to keep it a secret for too long. That kind of passionate love flourishes and nothing can hide it. My favorite quote is "I had my release, the sweet release where fantasy met reality, pleasure met danger, and love wrapped it all together in a warm blanket." What an eloquent way to describe it. I look forward to reading more from this author.
I do not think it possible that such a love story could have been written by anyone unless lived by its author. There is rarely a Literotica story I would ever share with my wife, however, this is definitely an exception! Please keep up the high quality and romance in your writing.
Even after 8 years I believe you may still have the ability to write a follow-up to this really great story.
It's awesome love story. Totally believable and so well written. This came from the heart as if it really happened. It wasn't a stroke story. They made love. I would truly appreciate and like a follow on. Thank you.