All Comments on 'A Cure for Moonlight Ch. 02'

so she has two men watching her.

which one is good and which one is evil.

can't wait to read ch 3

I had chapter 3 nearly finished and my computer bit the dust. It unfortunately took chapter 3 to the grave with it. So... new computer, fresh start. Hope to submit 3 by tomorrow. Thanks for reading!

Deceptive categorization - should be listed under non consent/reluctance.

Wow, as a woman living alone, I had freakin chills the whole time. That character couldn't be more creepy. And how does he think she won't notice all that stuff he cleaned up! Anyhow, I can't wait to see who this protector is.

I agree this chapter should be non-consent/reluctance b/c the supernatural aspect isn't there yet. It is hard to decide when you want your story to have the same category. But, it does happen where a story can be in multiple categories. I'd have to say I agree that this one should be different.

Keep writing.

in the first chapter i was going to comment, 'not sure i'd be able to get off by imagining someone was watching me through my window', and after this, i'm even more sure.

how creepy is that bloke? Eurgh!

i'm hoping the 'guy who seems a little odd' is her mate... just hoping.

if you make the creepy guy her mate, i'll kill you. ;)

k_k

A bit creepy but good