I enjoy your stories, and with this one you're making the characters not only sympathetic and interesting, but relevant enough to tug at one's heart. I wish I'd had stories like this as I was learning about myself, and that holds true moreso today ( - okay I'm older but not dead :-) ) . My only suggestion, driven by my enjoyment of your writing , is longer chapters. That may not always work with your outline, but readers like me always appreciate having more good work to savor. Thanks!
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Anonymous06/14/12
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KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ITS GETTING REALLY GOOD!!! HOPE THE NEXT UPDATE IS AWSOME!!!!
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Anonymous06/25/12
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Just read all your stories in this series and wow =] Definitely loving it. Also definitely gonna read all your other stories. But could you have Josh getting it in the ass by Ayden too? I was happy Josh blew Ayden first but I think it would be really great for Josh to "submit" in a way too. Not really submit but just so they know they're equals, not like Josh is the dominant one if you know what I mean.
Congrats on getting Hero published! Can't wait for more on Josh and Ayden! Off to read your other stories now... =] Thanks!!
please finsh this series, i have read it about 5 times now, each time i pick up something different.
Deamon-Child
my seal, the eclipse...
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Anonymous08/12/12
Please update
Im kind of really fucking addicted
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Anonymous09/02/12
Can't wait
Omg I can't wait until the next story is out please make it fast please
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Anonymous09/18/12
Beautiful
I hope you make more chapters,
with love
emo and scene forverv
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Anonymous01/31/13
Damn
I'm kinda upset this isn't still going. It's only been a little over 6 months but I hope you get back into it. I really enjoy this one and I wanna see it through.
English
Loveloveloveit!!!
Best I've read from anybody on here in a while...more?please?
Yeah you're back
I have missed this story and am glad you have had time to write again can't wait for more.
Have missed Josh and Ayden.
Glad you've returned to this story
Congrats on Hero. Will it be very different from what you posted here?
Heartwarming!
I enjoy your stories, and with this one you're making the characters not only sympathetic and interesting, but relevant enough to tug at one's heart. I wish I'd had stories like this as I was learning about myself, and that holds true moreso today ( - okay I'm older but not dead :-) ) . My only suggestion, driven by my enjoyment of your writing , is longer chapters. That may not always work with your outline, but readers like me always appreciate having more good work to savor. Thanks!
g
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ITS GETTING REALLY GOOD!!! HOPE THE NEXT UPDATE IS AWSOME!!!!
=]
Just read all your stories in this series and wow =] Definitely loving it. Also definitely gonna read all your other stories. But could you have Josh getting it in the ass by Ayden too? I was happy Josh blew Ayden first but I think it would be really great for Josh to "submit" in a way too. Not really submit but just so they know they're equals, not like Josh is the dominant one if you know what I mean.
Congrats on getting Hero published! Can't wait for more on Josh and Ayden! Off to read your other stories now... =] Thanks!!
More PLEASE!!!!
Congrat on HerO, where can i find it?
please finsh this series, i have read it about 5 times now, each time i pick up something different.
Deamon-Child
my seal, the eclipse...
Please update
Im kind of really fucking addicted
Can't wait
Omg I can't wait until the next story is out please make it fast please
Beautiful
I hope you make more chapters,
with love
emo and scene forverv
Damn
I'm kinda upset this isn't still going. It's only been a little over 6 months but I hope you get back into it. I really enjoy this one and I wanna see it through.
i need to know wat happened
please don't leave us hanging we need to know at least one of us gay emo/scean/goth had a happy ending
MORE!
We need more. This series is amazing. Don't give up on this series now! Think of Josh and Ayden! :'(
Big Surprise!!!
ANOTHER UNFINISHED STORY ON LIT.
AHHHHHH!!!
i seriously hate this unfinished business, and its allways when they have you hooked :( depressing.... besides that loved it
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