to your incense stories loser.
I thought I'd check out the 'incense' stories that Anonymous recommended, but I couldn't even get a sniff of them!!!!
Must admit though, I didn't care much for this story either.
At least in the former you share among family members but this one is of wife sharing/gang bang,the husband is a wimp.today most of the LW submission is on cuckodery.More craps and it is getting monotonous reading.
Smuck author. Writer of tripe. Sometimes called a "sicko."
Do you need to ask why?
I am female and kind of like this idea. I wouldn't mind being used as a fuck slave at all.
Needs his dick removed he is no longer a man. He can be fucked by the boys also.
She missed her calling. The oldest profession would be right down her alley.
a 'delicately decorative flamboyant' commenter, perhaps even 'florid'
Flash tale with not a lot of 'blow by blow' (sorry!) detail, but it sounds like a fine week for the guys, and a real eye-opener for Sweety!
almost a home run except there were only sick losers including you writer.
Stay away from male humiliation and maybe win a few human readers.
need more closet cucks commenting, reading and spanking first of course. go cuckboy, it's your birthday!
I enjoyed the harmless fantasy
"I read a sex story and something immoral happened! I'm shocked, shocked I say!"
The only feedback I'd give is that I liked the story and I wish the bitch would have taken in the ass more graphically. One guy likes it rough, one guy likes it in the ass, but we didn't get any details. Luckily I have an imagination.
Sounds fun to me, I'd love to have 4 guys at my beck and coll for a week!
The style and voice of this "story" made it read more like bragging than a story. The best laugh came from reading the comments. Anonymous seems to need to label authors based on the content of stories they write.
Does that make G. Rodenberry an alien?
Odd comments aside, you fulfilled many a woman's AND husband's fantasy. Sharing your love and lust is certainly not a bad thing. Complainers and whiners need not comment, just move on.
When did husbands stop being men in America? This story is a perfect example of how American men have forgetten how to be men and the thier wives learned how to be whores and sluts, good luck to America.
good premis needed more substance maybe more detail... im no author and couldnt even do this good just felt like it ended as fast as it started. some lead in character depth is always good
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