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by KenfromIndy07/17/12

Well done

More of a flash story! The characters stayed true!
Could have been longer and fleshed out more but was not really necessary just more of
my preference!
Well written good job. Please keep up the writing and posting!
Thank you for your work

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by Anonymous07/18/12

yes he did

she did not die alone - he forgave her - u get a 5.

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by chytown07/20/12

Thanks***

For the read.

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by Tavadelphin05/14/13

Yep he showed up

He is not quite the hard ass he plays to be -

But he had his pride too lol

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by betrayedbylove05/15/13

Great Tale

No, he didn't forgive her, but he was there and made sure she didn't die alone. The hard ass turned softy. He would never admit it, however, but it helped him earn a few points with God. You did good tough guy.

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