More of a flash story! The characters stayed true!
Could have been longer and fleshed out more but was not really necessary just more of
Well written good job. Please keep up the writing and posting!
Thank you for your work
she did not die alone - he forgave her - u get a 5.
For the read.
He is not quite the hard ass he plays to be -
But he had his pride too lol
No, he didn't forgive her, but he was there and made sure she didn't die alone. The hard ass turned softy. He would never admit it, however, but it helped him earn a few points with God. You did good tough guy.
Thought this was very well done! Hero covering for friend that he knew would get a scholly was a bit of a far reach BUT the example of over betrayed people taking it out on those that they can was OUTSTANDING!
Wounded people wound others!
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