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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Proofread please - errors increasingly distracting

Please take a little time to check the you/her and me/him situation as its getting quite dittactjbg and wouldn't take that much to tidy up...

Otherwise, am liking it!!!

cryforhelpcryforhelpabout 11 years ago
First/second person or third person

As anonymous stated: please proofread, there are a lot of errors in grammar. Check that every "I" is replaced with "he" and "You" with "her"

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