Very good story. I think that story needs a prequel, a more complete description of the Brad's parents enslavement, and a sequel chapter, he and his slave mother alone.
I don't believe I've read a better story in my life. Very good detail. You could almost believe you were one of the characters. This is a work of art.
After reading this, I don't really see anything to make it the "summer Lovin" contest entry that you've made it out to be.
I love smut and fantasy but this is just stupid. Any father would have kicked the son's ass and divorced the bitch!
I've been coming to this site for SEVERAL years, but I've never bothered to make an account because... well I come and then I go... And I usually don't read any stories that have lower than a 4 star rating because I really hate spelling errors and plots with lots of holes. I took a chance on your story and I am so so happy I did. The whole story built me up and at the end... whoo... well, it was just fantastic.
Why is the rating on this story only 3.75? I'm baffled. Amazing piece of writing. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
hope there is more
> I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
@Anonymous: Thanks for the complimentary remarks. Both that one and the earlier ones.
Nice, hard edge to this story, Liked it a lot.
The kidding part is that you took it for truth, it is a story.
Did you forget the karate kicks ????
I liked the story.
PS At 16 I was 3" taller than my father, and had about 35 pounds on him. But I respected him, we were not combatants.
I love this story and its superb hero, Brad. Brad is the quintessence of the heroic young motherfucker. Big, strong, and ruthless in pursuing his own pleasure. He dominates his mother, who loves him all the more for it, as he dominates his shrimp-peckered dad. Having his father's silly little peepee and stupid diminutive nuts in a cage is a great idea, but letting his disgusting junk out of the cage and even permitting the old fool to fuck his own wife isn't. What Brad should do is menace his father with the threat of just slicing off that shit between dad's legs if he doesn't behave himself. (The threat would be enough, the boy doesn't have to go through with it--too much of a mess.) It's good that Brad sticks his fine fat prick in his father's mouth and blows his loaded young balls down dad's throat. It shows dad--dramatically--who's boss. I suspect that the boy unleashed his dad's inner cocksucker, that dad actually enjoyed having his son's powerful prick in his mouth, and tasting and swallowing the boy's big load of warm creamy semen. It's a shame that dad objected to getting a big sperm injection from Brad's balls up his twat. What the fuck did he think his twat was for? Well, at least Brad's still got his mother and her mommy-hole to stretch and pound with his mighty prick. His mother's sweet coochie is the receptacle natures provides for all the potent foaming sperm in Brad's big balls. Maybe it's time for the boy to fuck a baby up his mother's cunt?
There is nothing good anywhere in this load of juvenile horseshit; did you have mommy & daddy issues when you were in school and now you write this garbage as some sort of revenge fantasy? Find another hobby, quit polluting this site with drivel like this
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