All Comments on 'The Fate of Terra Ch. 11'

When you finish this get it published

Fantastic chapter as usual! Keep them coming as fast as your imagination works, or if it works too fast, then as fast as you can put it on paper:-) I love all the characters and really can't wait for the next part. This is the type of main character that I can feel in my psyche!

THIS FOR PURCHASE...

seriously... got a website? I may not have much and probably couldn't afford it without some saving, but this is some book worthy shit... and trust me, waiting for the next chapter is pure HELL

I read every chapter up to 10 and then checked twice daily for the next one..

Got a web blog or somewhere else where you post it? The wait is killer and I feel like a drug addict reading it...

ME WANT MOAR NAO!!!!! Sooooo gooooood...

Gr8 story. More plz. 70 yr. old reader, retired military

Lookin forward to more

Pandora must want James Merrick alive, although he may not be too pleased when he first wakes up. Is this the man that she mentioned to Michael?

read yesterday... came back and read again today, WHERES CH 12!!!??!?!?!

I started and read all 11 chapters in a row. You need to write more - they are interesting and have a good plot pacing.

I have to say, this is a pretty good series so far, it has slowed down a bit(maybe i'm just bored... damn adhd), but hopefully in the next few chapters it picks up.

While I find Michael as a character to be extremely implausible and too perfect (Just the way I like my protagonists.) I think everything else in the world is a very realistic depiction of how things would be. I especially appreciate that you had the cabby turn off the meter, that was just a nice little thing you had him do.

Aka the author is what we Scots call a 'heid ra ba'. But if he's got the cajones tae eat a mutton pie at Ibrox we'll gurd oor claidmohrs an' shag thae B'Amuf divers ;-)

The story lives on under my page. Check it out if you want

JC

That damn ending though... D-;

Who would have thought an erotic novel would be harbouring a complex and fully developed sci-fi fantasy novel inside itself. 5*

Stupid... Who the hell would want somebody weak enough to commit suicide to be one of their pilots?

re OpenWords: It's called 'survivor's guilt' for a reason. If I were to sort thru my many boxes of crap I call 'precious memories', I'd find a photo taken in Pat O'Brian's restaurant during my service days. Of the four men, I was the only one still alive two years later. Tommy had only 3 weeks to live before being murdered. Was I special? Did their parents love them any less than mine? They were all good friends and I wasn't responsible for their deaths or keeping them alive. I thought. 'That could'a been me,' Never, 'That should'a been me.' Therein lies the road to suicide, via noose, gun, drugs or alcohol. 5 stars for the side story alone.

Anon56