As a gentleman who enjoys a nice hand job, I found my physical reaction to this chapter to be almost sweet agony. Oh, how I wanted this character's hand on my penis! Your writing style really pulls this reader into your narratives, lending an extra dose of realism. I like the sense of innocence despite the graphic nature of the prose, and I like the ebb and flow that builds to a climax. Tantalizing chapter. Once again, well done.
From start to finish you injected an aire of erotic anticipation. The way you described each step was definitely arousing to say the least. Your description of what was happening to him made me wish she was doing it to me. I can definitely see them doing more and spending more time together. You have a great story, continue on with it.
Your words are like food to the perpetually hungry :)
pg, good soul that he is, will see how once again I am drawn to continue a story that was originally intended to have only three (not four) parts.
It's my own fault for the way I ended chapter 3, I'll admit. I left the very clear idea that there was something else, uhm ... coming.
I'm not dead-set against writing more chapters with these characters, but I think it would have to follow the idea of photography to be properly placed here; otherwise, it would just turn into more explorations of what acts the brother and sister would allow themselves to get into.
Anyone who has followed me through this little thing and the Double or Nothing story knows that I'm all about exploring the reluctance to plunge right into incestuous sex. I think that this very reluctance is what makes this genre interesting and realistic. And as much as I love to tease my poor readers, I hold at least some degree of realism as an important aim in my stories.
I don't mean to go on and on about this, but I think it's important and fair to my characters to say that I enjoy exploring the limits of erotic nudity among family members while at the same time playing upon the tensions of the very real taboo of going too far.
So, "AUTHOR'S NOTE," if you will. If you're expecting my heroines to willingly accept being penetrated vaginally (or otherwise) by their family men, then I'm not your girl.
But if you enjoy testing where, exactly, the limit between movie-night-in-pajamas (and maybe just a little something more) might happen to be, well, that's where I'm going. And you're welcome to come along with me :)
I believe Chapter 4 is a fine place to end the photo shoot. Sure seemed like a climax to me. Now, movie night in pajamas has me intrigued. Lead on, and I'll follow. I think we're like-minded on the subject of incest. It seems absolutely plausible that exploration can and will take place -- and be enjoyed. But I like the fact that a line can be drawn -- and not be crossed. Thanks again for your prose, Brandie69. Certainly glad I found it.
I think this story definitely feels concluded, but I do hope you do more with the characters. They're well-developed and offer much more potential, especially with the mom already catching one naked. An immediate follow-up could involve developing the photos/relationship...just a thought. Great work! I love the tease :)
PS: I'd gladly come along with you (great choice of words)!
Oops, did I say that? ;)
always it is you who keep me hooked to this site
If writing your prose affects you as much physically as my reading it does, then I suspect "come along with me" is exceedingly apt.
I won't submit a story that doesn't make me respond the way it is intended to make my readers respond. In that sense, and I suppose it's one of the little thrills of having a story actually go public here, I get to share a sensation with maybe hundreds, or thousands, of readers.
Here's to that (shared) response, no?
Here's to that shared response, yes!
Brandie you've earned another 5 star rating from me for this wonderful adventurous chapter. I've really enjoyed your story.
You've said in some of your responses that you like to explore - so may I suggest a photo session in the great outdoors in a park or a trail where there are always possibilities of being.......
Always nice to see your handle ;)
It's funny you should say that. I just submitted my entry in the summer contest and, while there isn't any photography in it, the themes are a lot like what you suggest.
It should be up on the site within about 72 hours.
On re-reading, there actually is photography in my summer contest submission. It was one quick little passing mention (of a true event, by the way), and I had forgotten all about it.
God you had me so hard and when I came it was incredible.. You are an amazing writer and very arousing. I lookforward to reading some of your other texts
I had read Chapter 1 when it first came out, but I wasn't aware until just now that there were three more new chapters. I enjoyed all 4 chapters.
Very nice pacing of increasing the heat with each chapter.
Loved the sticky, messy ending! YES!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Biggest load of rubbish I have ever read
It was a pretty big load.
I've looked forward to each additional segment. Keep up the good work. I am going to read all of your stories.
Excellent yarn. I came home from work one night to find my g/f reading it with her hand inside her navy blue cotton panties, wanking like there was no tomorrow.
After she'd made herself cum, she went and put on the school uniform she wears for me from time to time, bottle green gymslip, yellow blouse and white knee-hi socks and we spent the rest of the evening with my cock inside the ribbed leg of her bottle green cotton school knickers.
It's nice to hear from you. :)
Extremely Hott story Brandy. You have me hard as a rock!
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Your feelings about the range of things you have your family members do is acceptable ( yeah sounds so snooty and priggish) but probably a bit more realistic.. You have a very sensual teasing style of story telling and I do appreciate your stories. I voted before but did not comment so I am doing that now. Hope to read more from you. Thank you
Exasperation!! I am really and truly sorry to say that this story left me fustrated--and definitely not in a sexual connotation!!
Don't get me wrong. The story itself is totally fantastic, phenominal, gigantically awesome and beautiful. Again, the characters, Missy in particular, are truly animated and lively. Fustrating is four "chapters" and the brother and sister have just barely passed the rather soft foreplay, although Missy did just complete her brother's first handjob for him (he was ready to blow almost immediately)!!
The writer/author would be well advised--I don't presume to be bossy--to write more lengthy "chapters" to this story and give it some finality!! The reader at this point is left hanging--holding on just by the tips of their furcked up imaginations!!
Very good stories, made out of a credible scenario and with a credible crescendo.
I really appreciate that you managed to create such tension and bring it to the climax (he he) in just a page, without jumping the gun. Characters are depicted in a credible way, once again.
Would have commented on each chapter, but was too anxious to get to the next one..
Look foreward to reading the rest of your stories, Great Job, my dick was hard the entire series, Thanks
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