All Comments on 'What I Tell You In the Darkness'

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oneiriaoneiriaover 11 years ago
Very beautiful

This is a very evocative poem, and the phrasing is exquisite.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
BUT WILL YOU STILL LOVE ME TOMORROW

and after, Forever, TK U MLJ LV NV

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Talk to me please in bed -

Where it matters (from a Dory Previn song) says it all.

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
nice one

Want to be loved like that

TheMogul40TheMogul40about 11 years ago
Loved it

Very potent. A lot is communicated in the darkness - some of it is even spoken.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
*****

Five.

todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
i really love this

I have quibble about nectar but only the cliche of it, but yes a five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love and passion beautifully combined

"I know what I want, what I need, what I have," - sounds like you've found the perfect union and you've told us about it in a wonderfully sensuous way. Gorgeous.

jdbjdjdbjdover 3 years ago
Excellent ! ! !

* * * * * Excellent * * * * *

Leaves one with a wonderful sense of the beauty and depth of your relationship.

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