All Comments on 'The Swimming Pool 1964'

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Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 11 years ago
Hot story

I can always depend on a TxRad story being hot. There's always a lot of action between the guys and the girls.

There's one thing about the story that baffles me--where did the 1064 come from? I went back and reread the story, but didn't find any correlation. Was it supposed to be "The Swimming Pool 1964"?

Whatever, it was a great story anyway.

annanovaannanovaover 11 years ago
great story!

Everyone should have a pair of friends like this to help learn about sex. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good but needs an editor

Couch is something you sit on, Coach is what you meant. Really detracts from the story ...

TxRadTxRadover 11 years agoAuthor

Yeah, a little less that 24 hours from concept to posted on Lit and you find the same error twice. At least I'm consistent in my errors.

Try it sometimes yourself and see how many or few errors you miss. .

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