All Comments on 'Chemistry'

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purplhazepurplhazeover 11 years ago
hottt

Continue this plz!

LaVieErotiqueLaVieErotiqueover 11 years ago

This is uncompromisingly erotic and authentic.

Your writing interests me very much. Busy reading through your other writings. I like your style.......I think!

bluesky496bluesky496over 11 years ago

oh god i am so horny after reading this i want to be used like that just taken and used please write more

sincerelymaybesincerelymaybeover 11 years ago
Surprise !

Hmm. I haven't read or watched sex where names as bitch and pussy applies, but I decided to keep reading this and I enjoyed it ! I'm surprised with myself, learning more about myself each day, seriously. This was very sexy. I liked the twist at the end when he wrote his number, hah ! I'd like them to meet again, definitely.

SanguineAffairSanguineAffairover 11 years ago
Mmmf.

So glad to see another story from you! Fantastic, as expected. So much love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I like your writing, but prefer the gentler stuff.

npiccininpicciniover 11 years ago

How did I miss this?? Randomly thought to check your profile to see if you had any updates and saw that you had posted this story a while back. More of your amazingly awesome writing, loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I like your other stuff - this is a bit too rough and raw for me.

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Hi again. I remembered my passwords. I have a blog full of rough drafts and story beginnings. I've also put some ebooks together of material not on Literotica. Find me on Smashwords under Walker C. Fields.