All Comments on 'Alone with Allie'

The line near the beginning that reads:

"Oh come on, I can't be it's that small," she said laughing again.

should read:

“Oh come on, I can’t >>believe<< it’s that small,” she said laughing again.

And the word "them" in the sentence that follows should say "it."

Unlike so many others, plausible, believable, and well written. This may have been fiction, but probably is closer to what real people experience in the real world.

introduce me to Allie. She sounds like a delightful person and I'm happy to see that this series will be contiued.

I want to see all there is to see about Allie.