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Very Fragile! Handle with care!

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/20/12

What a lovely story

Very empathic, very sad and romantic.
Great written. I never been reading such a thing before.

Thank you

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by rodeorider5809/20/12

One of the Best

Absolutely one of the best stories I've read! Great story . Just fantastic

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by Anonymous09/20/12

Beautiful

Awesome. Brought tears to my eyes as I remembered my grief some time back.
I hope God gives you strength to go on.

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by Anonymous09/20/12

You made me cry! And I hate to cry!

What an amazing story. I had to read it twice, swallowing a lot of tears. You have captured the emotions and the tragedy of the events so brilliantly, I felt like I was witnessing it.
Tough stuff, made even me as a man weep like a baby.

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by Anonymous09/20/12

Amazing!

The Best i have read on Lit.
I Love it.

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by Ava3909/20/12

Great story

In english just as well as in german. I like the english version much.


Kisses
Ava

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by Anonymous09/20/12

Proof reading?

It is a pity when a beautiful story like this is not properly proof-read.
Or could it be that the author cannot distinguish between to lie and to lay?

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by tazz31709/20/12

SOMEWHERE SUN IS SHINING...PEOPLE SHOUTING

not HIM.the finally struck the final out, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous09/20/12

Touching and Melancholy

In spite of the sometimes labored and awkward wording and grammar in translation, the feelings came through throughout and overcame these problems. Poetic license extends to translation when the words are so clearly from the heart. Jon Taylor

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by Anonymous09/21/12

You touched my heart

Wow, amazing. Hearts splinter, that´s right.
I like it.

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by Fledermaus196309/21/12

Melancholy and beautiful

As Always a great job Maitre. I love both versions.

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by klara1809/21/12

amazing

This so totally my favorite story overall from you

Klara

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by Anonymous09/21/12

Touching me very well

Great written. I was sad at the end. Is he dead?

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by herbstblume111209/21/12

you are talented

Romance is yours.

Please write more in this categorie.

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by FreddyKrueger09/21/12

Romance is good

you wrote it very well.

I will still know wether he is dead ;-(


Freddy

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by Anonymous09/21/12

wow

great!! too bad she lost something that could have been so special.

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by Scorpio4409/21/12

Well done!

Your style and story telling skills are unique here. This cautionary tale should be required reading for all those in high school cliques.
Thank you.

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by MaitreNuit09/25/12

I want to thank you all

I'm glad you liked this story, too.

I'm aware, I'm not a native speaker and no editing can be perfect. Things like "lay" vs. "lie" may slip, but as long as the story remains readable and understandable, there isn't much damage done.

@ Freddy
He is dead! No doubt about it.

@ anonymous 10
The story is depressing, sad and - agreed - not erotic... But don't you dare to dictate others what they have to consider romantic. I do think, some of them share my point of view that romance don't require necessarily a happy end.

@ all
Thank you once again.

Your
MaitreNuit

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