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In the Adirondack Clouds

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by demure10109/27/12

Oh hell -

great, lovely - and hard to stomch. Thank you very much!

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by Desejo09/27/12

Wow - This takes graphic to a whole new level.
The choice of like 'claw' and 'mauling' is what makes this unusual and powerful.
I like the use of water in the beginning and end too. The title is also an interesting choice.

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by twelveoone09/27/12

that is hard to top 5ed

Two silver manes
regard a babbling brook.

She reaches into his lap,
with an arthritic liver-spotted claw,

ended well too

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by tazz31709/27/12

THE OLD FOLKS GO TO THE MOUNTAINS

whether to reminesce or re live a past time. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by greenmountaineer09/27/12

Except for this thing I have about the word "cunt," except perhaps where there's anger or catharsis, this is one of your best.

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