All Comments on 'The Airplane Ride Home'

by Schaka

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

I hope there are more chapters cumming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
It was a good story but stop using the big words. No one talks like

It was a good story but stop using the big words. No one talks like that. "vicissitudes" " bedraggled" "interminable" I almost stopped reading after the 3rd paragraph just because of the word usage.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 11 years ago
I agree

It's grady that you want to use the Queens English, but believe me, my brothers dump so much on me just for speaking properly.

Secondly, please continue.

It was a great start, and you could expand so much more. Plenty of possibilities in this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I enjoyed the vocabulary

Dont stop using "big words" simply because they don't understand them

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Greatstory and great word usage don't stop because people don't understand the words but that's what happens when you quit at 2nd grade

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more chapters plaese

more chapters please, in different places with the dad sleeping beside them, eg train, boat, etc

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
the turning point in this excellent story

is when 18 year old Sam peeks into the bathroom and sees his mother naked after her shower. His mom's feminine form excites the kid, her luscious breasts and perky ass, but what overwhelms his young mind is that hairy hole between her legs. His mother's vagina, "the same vagina I had come out of in birth!" Sam's own damn birth canal, his own mother's cunt. It's hard to express all that his mother's cunt means to a boy. It stands for unconditional love, for the joyful start of his whole life-story, for pleasure beyond his imagining, for everything Mom. No wonder that gazing on that paradise between his mother's thighs, Sam spontaneously creams his shorts. Some boys can even cream just saying the words to themselves, "my mother's cunt," "my own mommy's twat," "the twat I came out of," and similar terms of endearment. Boys instinctively know that nothing can ever feel as comfy and cosy, as warm and loving, just so damn right to their young penis as their own mother's vagina. For them it's the most beautiful anything in the whole frigging world and the uniquely perfect receptacle for every drop of semen they've got in their hot young balls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
should be posted under BBW

WHAT A WASTE OF TIME

LilliePrincessLilliePrincessabout 7 years ago
Nice story.

I really enjoyed this story. Something about the combination of themes made it super hot.

sexysue401sexysue401about 7 years ago
GREAT STORY

I loved it would of like for it too be a little more explicit and longer, cant wait to read the other chapters when i get home, im sitting on the train rubbing my thighs together as my moist pussy drips on my legs

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Makes me hard

Hi sexysue401, Want to experience this kind of story ?

This story makes me hard all the time, my penis keeps on producing pre-cum while reading ..

Firmhands5Firmhands5over 5 years ago
AH, Mom

To really experience Mom - nothing for a man than his mom - so well written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fucked up

What the fuck is up with U continuously talking about D boy eating cum. I would’ve enjoyed D story if U didn’t fuck it up with D stupid gay shit!!!!!

ryantrixryantrixover 3 years ago

Shouldn't have added the cum eating stuff.

rpott122rpott122over 2 years ago

Read comments on schaka's story....email axbycz7890@gmail.com to discuss more mom son pls.....a loving son....will discuss it nice and slow

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