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Oktoberfest Sex-Geschichte

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by Anonymous

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by domroger10/08/12

Slow start

A slow start but well worth the wait .I see that you have left room for a sequel .Please write it .

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by Anonymous10/08/12

Another fabulous submission. You write the songs that make the whole world sing, but by whole world I mean literotica readers, songs; erotic fiction, and by sing; beat off.

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by Formbdy2k201110/08/12

Memories

This story brought back memories of my college days in Wisconsin although I did have better success. Great job!!

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by Anonymous10/08/12

I hope you continue this!

Great characters, please continue!

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by Anonymous10/08/12

Simply OUTSTANDING !!!!!!

:)

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by Anonymous10/08/12

One of the better ones of the year!

Great job building excitement and great characters. And, hot sex! Lets see the rest!!

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by ReiDeBastos10/08/12

Excellent!

My one tiny criticism: I couldn't believe that Troy would use the word "dissuade".

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by Anonymous10/08/12

Great story!

Loved the characters, the build-up, and especially the all important message - sexiness is about confidence and personality!

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by Anonymous10/09/12

This is how to write

Excellent story, fantastic balance between character and action

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by hermie5510/09/12

great story, just the kind i like to read.

A story filled with erotic images that lead to a wonderful end.

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by Anonymous10/09/12

awesome

Great story... loved the ending "I'm your girlfriend, stupid." Lol

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by ottokar10/09/12

simply...

... wunderful! and really nice ending: "i'm your girlfriend, stupid!" really loved it. wouldn't mid to read more of this or more like this!

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by drteetho10/09/12

I liked it!

A fun romp of a story! Interesting how you set the main character up to pine for one girl only to have his first time with someone else. Nice twist and well done!

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by westphalia10/10/12

Glad for the twist

I got a bit nervous in the middle when "his" girl hooked up with another. Beautiful ending, thanks for writing!

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by NellaBarely210/10/12

Humor, Romance, pleasure, suspense ...

Your talent for capturing Any Reader is amazing. I will take the time and read it again to relive the joy ... of Reading C B Summers. Your novel WILL Be a treasure worth waiting for. - NellaBare

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by saidinbalefire10/10/12

Another great story. Well done!!!

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by Anonymous10/10/12

Great story, please more from these characters

can't wait for the novel. Loved this story! Keep them cumming please!

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by NellaBarely210/13/12

Don't break the spell!

Great work of Reality! HOT... yet sweet.

Who else can use "poindexter, gobble, flabbergast and BB gun" in an enjoyable story about young love? Who else crafts the vocabulary of nerdy, inexperienced, hot-to-trot adventurers pushing the envelope into never before imagined emotional possibilities?

Few authors can set the stage and Guide the reader back to such a coming-of-age episode. This special moment in time is complete; anything more would break the spell.

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by NellaBarely210/13/12

So real

You bring back images many of us can recall with more clarity than we care to admit to close friends. That goes for the jerk imposing on weaker "friend" with a sock on the door knob, the struggling achne-faced nerd watching the "rutting animals" in a dorm room, as well as the two fledgling Lovebirds in their hopefully secluded love nest. Congrats. A True WINNER!

Love all your works, even if I haven't read every one ... YET

Thanks for your notification of this new post

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by Anonymous10/26/12

how can it get better

I will love any more there is but do not know what could top this. I got off to your 'sex-geshichte' almost like you watching Briona

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by sleeplessgurl10/28/12

Loved it

Your stories always feel like a fun ride, CB, but this one also had fantastic character development and tenderness too. Great story. Enjoyed it immensely.

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by Anonymous11/13/12

Fantastic!

That was totally fantastic! I was absorbed in this from front to back and like a good book I couldnt put it down. Thanks

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by Johngfaulh11/23/12

I Really Enjoyed It

You could actually build on this as they begin their relationship. They could surprise Troy and Briona

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by Anonymous11/30/12

Killed the mood.

Not a bad story... But finding out that Bree was doing that like, RIGHT after her date with Hand, it ruined the rest of the story. Idk, just me and my stupid thoughts.

Otherwise, great stuff. The finalle was good.

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by Anonymous12/29/12

Amazing!

That was probably one of the best stories i've read on this site!

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by Anonymous02/20/13

A Great Story !

It's great because it is both funny, sexy, and even without the sex, a story worth reading. Nice surprise with Briona turning out the way she did. Liked the happy ending too.
What was that thing in the bushes?
Excellent Job !!!

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by Oleguy03/04/13

Me too.?

Gotta ask, what was the thing in the bushes?
Sir, you do one hell of a job.

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by Anonymous07/20/13

A touching story

This story has really touched me. In the sense that the first part made me experience again the sense of frustration, failure and rage against oneself that I lived years ago, in similar circumstances (not so extreme, fortunately). I don't know if the author experienced it, but he described very precisely how a "nerd" lives the lacking of skills and resources to face the whole dealing-with-women issue.
And realistically, the second part makes sense in the way that the lessons painfully learn really make the difference for Hans.
My congrats and my humble praise for a touching story.

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by Anonymous08/16/13

lush

Lush, juicy and satisfying

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by Privates1stClass09/26/13

It's Oktoberfest again

I searched for an Oktoberfest story and found this great tale.

Nerds need love too. You've pointed out how many of us bumbled around campus until we encountered "true love."

Thanks for posting.

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by Anonymous12/23/13

Nice.

I enjoyed this one. ...was a little shocked by the Briona/Troy situation, but i really enjoyed the second half of the story. The pent up horniness and awkwardness made it all the more enjoyable. Nerds unite!

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by ravenhairedcutie12/26/13

Haha! I really enjoyed reading this. I find the hero of this story likeable and funny. This is my new favorite story here on literotica.

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by Anonymous01/24/14

Love the passion!!

This girl I've been friends with we always sext back and forth and she sent a 1 minutes video of her masturbating which hardly ever happens. It was so hot and I loved it and she wanted a hot story an hour later. I was looking and found this. I read parts here and ther but ultimately started reading page 3. I love how this nerd finally gets everything he fantasized about! I'm 22 as of recently and only sexual thing I ever had happen is grinding at sweet 16 party and I got boner pretty easily but the girls were super hot. I love that the two were deeply into each other and there was obviously love between them like they were meant to be. Incredible story! Love it and hope I have something similar happen and first girl I have sex with is girl I'm really into and like her alot. Thanks for story

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by Anonymous02/15/14

ach du liebe

Wish I had read this before I went to college

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by koolau06/07/14

Lovely.......

Great story and well written. Hopefully there will be a follow up on all four characters. It'll be interesting to read what this author will pen.

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by sexhead206/13/14

STORY CONSTRUCTION

Wonderful story development. Wonderful dialog. Wonderful individual character descriptions .
No doubt about it you have a wonderful talent. Keep it up.

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by Anonymous07/01/14

What a fantastic ending to an incredible journey

I only wish that it had been me reliving my sexploits but alas no. I`m 68 years old and would have given my back teeth to have been that young man.

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by new_reader07/22/14

I am glad the dude caught a break in the end here, as he came off as more than a bit pathetic in the first couple of pages.

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