A slow start but well worth the wait .I see that you have left room for a sequel .Please write it .
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Anonymous10/08/12
Another fabulous submission. You write the songs that make the whole world sing, but by whole world I mean literotica readers, songs; erotic fiction, and by sing; beat off.
A fun romp of a story! Interesting how you set the main character up to pine for one girl only to have his first time with someone else. Nice twist and well done!
Your talent for capturing Any Reader is amazing. I will take the time and read it again to relive the joy ... of Reading C B Summers. Your novel WILL Be a treasure worth waiting for. - NellaBare
Who else can use "poindexter, gobble, flabbergast and BB gun" in an enjoyable story about young love? Who else crafts the vocabulary of nerdy, inexperienced, hot-to-trot adventurers pushing the envelope into never before imagined emotional possibilities?
Few authors can set the stage and Guide the reader back to such a coming-of-age episode. This special moment in time is complete; anything more would break the spell.
You bring back images many of us can recall with more clarity than we care to admit to close friends. That goes for the jerk imposing on weaker "friend" with a sock on the door knob, the struggling achne-faced nerd watching the "rutting animals" in a dorm room, as well as the two fledgling Lovebirds in their hopefully secluded love nest. Congrats. A True WINNER!
Love all your works, even if I haven't read every one ... YET
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Anonymous10/26/12
how can it get better
I will love any more there is but do not know what could top this. I got off to your 'sex-geshichte' almost like you watching Briona
Your stories always feel like a fun ride, CB, but this one also had fantastic character development and tenderness too. Great story. Enjoyed it immensely.
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Anonymous11/13/12
Fantastic!
That was totally fantastic! I was absorbed in this from front to back and like a good book I couldnt put it down. Thanks
You could actually build on this as they begin their relationship. They could surprise Troy and Briona
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Anonymous11/30/12
Killed the mood.
Not a bad story... But finding out that Bree was doing that like, RIGHT after her date with Hand, it ruined the rest of the story. Idk, just me and my stupid thoughts.
Otherwise, great stuff. The finalle was good.
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Anonymous12/29/12
Amazing!
That was probably one of the best stories i've read on this site!
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Anonymous02/20/13
A Great Story !
It's great because it is both funny, sexy, and even without the sex, a story worth reading. Nice surprise with Briona turning out the way she did. Liked the happy ending too.
What was that thing in the bushes?
Excellent Job !!!
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Slow start
A slow start but well worth the wait .I see that you have left room for a sequel .Please write it .
Another fabulous submission. You write the songs that make the whole world sing, but by whole world I mean literotica readers, songs; erotic fiction, and by sing; beat off.
Memories
This story brought back memories of my college days in Wisconsin although I did have better success. Great job!!
I hope you continue this!
Great characters, please continue!
Simply OUTSTANDING !!!!!!
:)
One of the better ones of the year!
Great job building excitement and great characters. And, hot sex! Lets see the rest!!
Excellent!
My one tiny criticism: I couldn't believe that Troy would use the word "dissuade".
Great story!
Loved the characters, the build-up, and especially the all important message - sexiness is about confidence and personality!
This is how to write
Excellent story, fantastic balance between character and action
great story, just the kind i like to read.
A story filled with erotic images that lead to a wonderful end.
awesome
Great story... loved the ending "I'm your girlfriend, stupid." Lol
simply...
... wunderful! and really nice ending: "i'm your girlfriend, stupid!" really loved it. wouldn't mid to read more of this or more like this!
I liked it!
A fun romp of a story! Interesting how you set the main character up to pine for one girl only to have his first time with someone else. Nice twist and well done!
Glad for the twist
I got a bit nervous in the middle when "his" girl hooked up with another. Beautiful ending, thanks for writing!
Humor, Romance, pleasure, suspense ...
Your talent for capturing Any Reader is amazing. I will take the time and read it again to relive the joy ... of Reading C B Summers. Your novel WILL Be a treasure worth waiting for. - NellaBare
Another great story. Well done!!!
Great story, please more from these characters
can't wait for the novel. Loved this story! Keep them cumming please!
Don't break the spell!
Great work of Reality! HOT... yet sweet.
Who else can use "poindexter, gobble, flabbergast and BB gun" in an enjoyable story about young love? Who else crafts the vocabulary of nerdy, inexperienced, hot-to-trot adventurers pushing the envelope into never before imagined emotional possibilities?
Few authors can set the stage and Guide the reader back to such a coming-of-age episode. This special moment in time is complete; anything more would break the spell.
So real
You bring back images many of us can recall with more clarity than we care to admit to close friends. That goes for the jerk imposing on weaker "friend" with a sock on the door knob, the struggling achne-faced nerd watching the "rutting animals" in a dorm room, as well as the two fledgling Lovebirds in their hopefully secluded love nest. Congrats. A True WINNER!
Love all your works, even if I haven't read every one ... YET
Thanks for your notification of this new post
how can it get better
I will love any more there is but do not know what could top this. I got off to your 'sex-geshichte' almost like you watching Briona
Loved it
Your stories always feel like a fun ride, CB, but this one also had fantastic character development and tenderness too. Great story. Enjoyed it immensely.
Fantastic!
That was totally fantastic! I was absorbed in this from front to back and like a good book I couldnt put it down. Thanks
I Really Enjoyed It
You could actually build on this as they begin their relationship. They could surprise Troy and Briona
Killed the mood.
Not a bad story... But finding out that Bree was doing that like, RIGHT after her date with Hand, it ruined the rest of the story. Idk, just me and my stupid thoughts.
Otherwise, great stuff. The finalle was good.
Amazing!
That was probably one of the best stories i've read on this site!
A Great Story !
It's great because it is both funny, sexy, and even without the sex, a story worth reading. Nice surprise with Briona turning out the way she did. Liked the happy ending too.
What was that thing in the bushes?
Excellent Job !!!
Me too.?
Gotta ask, what was the thing in the bushes?
Sir, you do one hell of a job.
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