All Comments on 'Golden Truth'

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demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Golden -

but, it seems, a little bitter, too. Hmmm.

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Hard truth

when relations outgrow each other

and drift away to other lovers

bflagsstbflagsstover 11 years ago

Not a mouse

 Shall disturb this hallowed house.

 I am sent with broom before

 To sweep the dust behind the door.

njoyjadenjoyjadeover 11 years agoAuthor
Still love the one I'm with!

I appreciate comments and feedback.

Poetry can sometimes be case senitive and in this case the interpretation was left too vague.

Sometimes my poems are based upon memories of times long ago.

Please consider that I was born in 1965, have memories dating back to before the age of 2 and at eighteen, met and am still with my best friend.

Life is good!

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
INDIVIDUAL GROWTH AND MATURITY

is not simultaneus together, TK U MLJ LV NV

MisterSadeMisterSadeover 11 years ago
Tricksters fool you into assumption.

Like the old saying doesn't go: Make an assumption, and you make an ass of u and umption.

Leave all things gold behind.

Faith in ambiguity.

The game continues...

I love the game.

Break yourself off for me--cum really hard in the next 24 hours.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
#2 IT SEEMS AS IF THE WRONG PERSON

in this relationship is the stratus climber, TK U MLJ LV NV

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I believe in Kindness, God , Joy , The Holy Spirit: all of which guide me !! When I meet someone I see the similarities and common bond of being born into the human race as equals. No one is any less or more important than me. As it should be.