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Oh Christmas Tree!

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by Hornyginger11/10/12

Very hot!

That was very hot, got me so horny. Would love to be the one getting fucked by Dutch ;-)

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by TimothyM11/10/12

Nice start on the Winter Holiday contest, SR

Damn, why does something hot like that never happen when I have to buy a Christmas tree. Maybe I don't go the the right lots.

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by MSTarot11/10/12

Jingle balls?

Okay, not my normal story type but well written and the Christmas jingles got me to laughing. Good story.

The part where he said he picked Dutch up at the bar...I don't know why but it seemed a bit out of place. Writing wise... not story wise. It read a little confusing. Almost like an unexpected speed bump in the story flow.
Shrugs.

M.S.Tarot

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by lonesomedove6611/11/12

Got to love the christmas carols lol

I liked it too but I do hope he doesn't keep up his relationship with Karen, as that is wrong he needs to accept who he is or he will never be happy but our esteemed Santa Claus, lol, obviously is very comfortable in himself and his knowledge of him that he sings to him lol

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by D_Lynn11/26/12

How much...

...do you think Dutch would charge me to watch?
Good for Scotty. Nice writing.

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by NekoParks11/28/12

Well written as usual but

this story left me feeling melancholy and sad for both Scott and Karen. This feels like two different stories—one a poignant story about a young man’s realization of his true sexual nature, and then, a light-hearted Christmas raunchy-romp with Dutch and his take on “Jiggle Bells”. This scene is both hot and absurd at the same time.

I understand that this story is written for GM audience, but a little resentment against the female character, Karen, colors the narrator's or Scott's comments regarding her ("For our first Christmas together," Karen said in that "we're so blessed" voice of hers, as she put her arm through mine. "). Then again, this is consistent characterization since Scott does envy Karen's sexual fulfillment. Anyway, neither Scott nor Karen will be truly, deeply happy in this relationship. Every human being deserves to be loved well and truly for oneself

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