Short, sweet, to the point. Enough back story to start, then right into the heat. Crisp and real dialogue, kinky and dirty sex. Well done
I enjoyed the read ... very nice tale. Wonder what you'll introduce to her next?
First part absolutely brilliant - Wonderful dialog. - So authentic! And as this charming little story picked up momentum, I swear I heard Audrey II in the background. A one plant chorus. Really! A visit to the Little Shop will never be quite the same.
Thank you! Excellent story. Nice build up. Makes me wish I had a more adventuresome partner who would do this with me. Keep up the excellent stories!
Next time my wife asks what I want for dinner, I'm going to tell her.
My dictionary defines pornography as stories, pictures or films intended to arouse sexual excitement
Fits this authors work to a T and I'm sorry it took me so long to discover him and his great cock-raising stories.
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