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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/24/12

Cuckolding their mates ain't romance!

Written reasonably well, but still a cuckolding story and hence a "1."

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by Butterflies51211/24/12

PS

A close week at Fantasy...better late than never.

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by mcollect11/24/12

ok

Too short and not character development. Three times as long would have helped.

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by Anonymous11/25/12

This isn't romance. If they have "fallen in love" then they need to get a divorce and be together. Not screw around and then "have my baby" crap. And with little character development I, as a reader, can't see either character as anything but selfish.

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by josephstevens11/26/12

Quite!

It's very brevity, urgency and lack of character 'build' is a virtue. They're there. They can. They want to. They do. Simple. Life can be simple, y'know....Thanks!

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