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by William smyth11/26/12

Well done

Although this theme is not one of my favorites I'm compelled to give the story a top rating for the good writing and for the exceptionally good illustrations.

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by EdwardMidweston11/26/12

I agree with William 100%. Not one of my favorite themes or plot arcs, but extremely well written and illustrated. It's a 5 for sure.

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by stormkite11/27/12

Run this by your copy editor again.

Decent theme and work but the typos and grammatical failings are distracting enough to make the story unreadable.

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by Rugrat6012/11/12

Well done

Well written asnd interesting look at very early traditions and fears.

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