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by Anonymous

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by TheTitLover11/29/12

Fantastic

What a disgusting, male chauvinist fantasy! I loved it.

It perhaps belongs in fetish rather than BDSM unless you have a coming twist. I just think a lot of readers may shy away from BDSM, I usually do.

I'm really looking forward to seeing more of Jim's world.

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by ScottWood11/30/12

Clarification

Unfortunately it was not my idea for the story to be in BDSM, its where it got put :(

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by eWoman12/01/12

It's easy...

to enjoy the written porn of a 'hard-drinking, whore-hopping degenerate' when they write quite well, create interesting characters, can spell and know how to paragraph and punctuate for pacing and tension. Any time you're ready to write -- I'm ready to read. Well done...take care -- hcl

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by PanicByNumbers12/07/12

Excellent start

I love the casual exhibitionism and submission of the women. Can't wait to read more. Really hot world you're building.

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