I could understand "And now her 'soon to be' husband. " or even "And now her future husband. " but not "And now her soon to be future husband. "
That means that soon he's going to be her future husband!! In which case he already is her 'future husband'!
I stopped reading after a few words. Most authors show their lack of command of these two verbs at some time but you did it straight away .Go and learn English before you try to write.
You would think that if you were going to be so judgmental that you would stand behind it and sign your own name instead of Anonymous! What ever happened to finding something nice to say and providing useful feedback? You must have either had strict parents who always had harsh words for you or you had teachers that should not have been teaching! Either way....I'm sorry for you both!
Thank God I'm just some dumb redneck that likes to read a good story . I don't think i could handle being a genius like so many other people that read these stories and leave such good and meaningful comments . Thanks for a great story . Thanks for taking the time and writing it so i have something to read .
I thought it was very sensual. Good story.
Or a porn site? Get yer willies out and put your text books away, kiddies!
Story even for a continuous from a previous makes no sense. The counting is strange. If they are cousins how can they get married?
For the readers that say cousins can't get married, there are several states cousins can get married with no restrictions, several more they can marry with restrictions ie, sterile, past childbearing age etc. It was a very good story though would like to know what was in the file relatives are hiding from them
The File contents are explained at the end of "A Gift On Christmas Eve."
If I wanted an English lesson I would go to grammer book. l want Literotica, not some show off trying to teach English.
they weren't real cousins, they were adopted u dummy and i already know how to count. If I wanted an English lesson i'd go to an English literature website, but i wanted sex so i came here expecting to read about sex but instead i get some bitch who's numbers WTF........
The heavy implication in the first story was that they are actually brother and sister, so I wouldn't get to hung up on the cousins bit. LOL
for all you twits that havent got it yet they are twins. if you go by the first story they are the same age and the test shows close enough to be siblings. however in all 50 states since they were adopted and have no knowledge of it they can get married with the adoption paers in hand.
I do enjoy reading stories here that turn me on, and this story was just a nice, pleasant one that snuck up on me sexually. It focused on foreplay and admitted that her orgasm wasn't the biggest. What a delightful reality check! This compares so favorably with the usual focus on booming orgasms and plunging members into superheated sheaths. My compliments to the author.
One page doesn't cut it in my book.
Never have I read, on this site, so much said with love, with so few words.
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