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Christmas On Duty

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by Anonymous

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by sirhugs12/09/12

Cute

Truly romantic without curdling a skeptical stomach.

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by theravenfox12/09/12

Good Luck in the Contest!

:)

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by GentleViking12/09/12

Hmm

Why go to the New Forest if the hotel is in Tunbridge Wells. There are several hours between the two. A quick look at Google Maps would have given you that bit of info.

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by john194612/09/12

Fun

A fun story...thanks

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by oggbashan12/09/12

Oops! Not the New Forest

I made an editing error. I was going to have the hero and heroine go to http://www.sandyballs.co.uk/ The Sandy Balls Park in the New Forest but decided it might be too cold at Christmas.

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by Richie411012/09/12

Well crafted start

The story developed nicely. It deserves to be developed further. "They lived happily ever after" doesn't do justice to what you've crafted. I do like your stile and hope to read more of your efforts.
Thank you

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by Handley_Page12/12/12

Erm . . .Distances?

Ogg, did I miss something here?

"Where is this hotel we are going to?"
"In the country near Tunbridge Wells."
and
"I can drive us to the New Forest."

The two places are about 120 miles apart.

But a lovely simple and pleasant story. Thank you.

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by Anonymous01/14/13

The setup so far seems good. Will there be more? Soon? :-)

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by oggbashan12/10/13

They're going to a hotel near Tunbridge Wells - at last!

I have finally got round to editing my geographical error. They are now both going tp the hotel near Tunbridge Wells instead of the New Forest.

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by marty407a02/25/14

Excellent story

I read this before I realized that I had had a simular experience, not at Christmas, but at a 4th of July party in North Dakota. Thank you for the reminder.

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by phil221303/18/14

Dynamite comes in small packages and this story fit the bill.

Really, no room for excursions off the mark in this story. This was direct succinct and blazing hot. Sounds like my second marriage courting dance....Boom! Here we are in no man's land betrayed by love now let's try eachother and see what happens! Very nice. I lived it. Thank you!

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