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Jenna Gets Taken

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by Anonymous

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by Remain_in_shadow12/23/12

Very nice, Jenna.

Well constructed and well paced; a tried and true theme, well handled, especially for a first timer.

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by Azalia12/23/12

I just want to know one thing...

Was 'the man' Josh? XD

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Good

I thought this was very well done.
Keep writing

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by Anonymous12/24/12

Do you think you are being creative? Half the stories on here end like that! I liked it until the ending.

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by Anonymous12/24/12

It's good but the ending wasn't.

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by Anonymous12/25/12

I loved the ending!

It makes a potentially abusive story positive, and one in which anyone could proudly engage.

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by Teni01/07/13

I actually liked the surprise change at the end. I know a lot of people didn't.

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by Anonymous01/08/13

Hot

Hot story, you have a wicked mind, I like it!

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by Anonymous01/08/13

It was hot because it was a fantasy. It's porn, come on, it's all fantasy. The ending was good because it acknowledged it.

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by Anonymous01/09/13

Audio

Any chance of this being an audio story too? Your current audio story is pretty hawt.

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by jennahale01/10/13

Thanks for the feedback

Thank you everyone for the feedback, I'll take everything into consideration when writing my next one (I'll even listen to you Mr. Anonymous - Thanks for your negative feedback on my non-creativity). And yes, I'm thinking about making this into a audio submission for those of you who were wondering :)

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Well done yet still classy

Just read this story after listening to your recorded one. I personally think raping a woman or screwing a farm animal is repugnant. But, to each their own. I liked the fantasy element much more than an actual rape, so ignore the guys who hated on you. They have plenty of stories to keep them busy.

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