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of a first time adventure.

This new author has made a good start with three very good stories.

More from her will be very welcome.

You never forget the first time!!

MY FIRST TIME? BEING PROCESSED INTO THE LOS ANGELES COUNTY JAIL IS ONE LONG AND TEDIOS AGONY. PRINTS AND PHOTOS AND BODY SEARCHES AND A WELL TAILORED SUIT TRADED FOR ORANGE COVERALLS. INSTEAD OF A COMFORTABLE CELL I WAS SURPRISED WHEN ENTERING ONE OF THE REC-ROOM OVERFLOW LIVING QUARTERS. ROW UPON ROW OF DOUBLE BUNK BEDS LINED UP LIKE TWO MAN COFFINS AS FAR AS THE EYE COULD SEE. FOR MYSELF, I WAS YOUNG, GOOD LOOKING, WHITE AND TOTALLY DEFENSELESS WHEN IT CAME TO WARDING OFF ANY WOULD-BE THREAT TO MY SAFETY. MY FIRST REALIZATION WAS THAT THE LIVING QUARTERS WERE SEGREGATED, NOT MY ANY MEASURES OF THE JAILING SYSTEM, BUT RATHER, BY THE INMATES THEMSELVES. THERE WAS A CHICANO AREA, A SMALLISH WHITE AREA AND A MASSIVE BLACK AREA. EACH ONE BLENDING INTO THE NEXT, AND YET STRICT DEMARCATION LINES BETWEEN EACH GROUP. WHEN NIGHT CAME I WAS CALLED OUT TO WHAT WAS, IN COMMON PARLANCE, A COVERED WAGON. FOUR BLACKS FORCED ME INTO THE BLACK AREA WHERE TWO DOUBLE BUNKS WERE PUSHED TOGETHER WITH A COUPLE OF BLANKETS COVERING EVERYTHING FROM OUTSIDE VIEW. ONCE INSIDE I WAS STRIPPED BARE AND LAYED OUT ON MY BACK AND HELD DOWN BY THE SAME FOUR BLACKS WHO USHERED ME IN. "WE'RE GOING TO TURN YOU INTO A GIRL TONIGHT, LIL' BIT."

First-time stories are best if they have the author's heart rate elevated and shown in every word. It is flesh seeking pleasure--it is a ride to an unrestrained shot from the character's prick and it comes from the author's own sexual need spelled out. The reader's hand must be as free as the writer's hand.

I loved the story, its the same fantasy I have for a guy at my job, only problem he's straight and quite hard core. I'll meet that right guy to take my virginity. harrisjoey6@gmail.com.