a loyal fan. ;) Enjoyed your story and looking forward to more.
I liked how you did not have her get all pissed off about his porn. It really isn't a big deal. Nice build up to the final scene.
Hi, I really liked all the little details in this - you carefully described the build up really well and Kat's thoughts and responses feel authentic. I'd have liked to have seen a bit more on the actual sex with Jack and his reactions to her extraordinary present. I enjoyed it a lot.
Some grammer misteaks, but in all it was very good story, I really love it when you described his licking of your anus, I love to lick and rim that brown hole before I apply lube and fuck it. Hope to see more from you. email@example.com
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