Like your story cant wait to see what happens
Still here and ready for more
You are doing very well--playing hardball with her motivations and past. You're well beyond the usual monster-lovestory here. Very impressed indeed.
is he going to go beg to be turned into a drider somehow now?
Interesting. I see a couple different ways this could go, and I'll be interested to learn which one you pick. I'll be waiting patiently for this to update.
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Like your story cant wait to see what happens
Still here and ready for more
Ongoing, Excellent Backstory
You are doing very well--playing hardball with her motivations and past. You're well beyond the usual monster-lovestory here. Very impressed indeed.
is he going to...
is he going to go beg to be turned into a drider somehow now?
Interesting. I see a couple different ways this could go, and I'll be interested to learn which one you pick. I'll be waiting patiently for this to update.
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Back to Rescuing Layna Ch. 02 or
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