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Lana - Double Time

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by Anonymous

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by ythebadger02/07/13

Short, boring

unerotic.

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by policywank02/07/13

Good story

Lana sounds like a yummy slut.....gives me an idea or two for hubby to have a photo shoot with me

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by andromon02/07/13

Short and sweet.

A formula that more authors should have used, really.

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by Lickideesplit02/07/13

Huh?

Hubby wants Stud to do doggie on his Sweetie, then gets pissy about her liking it?!?!
WTF. Can't have a score more than 3* !?!?!

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by Anonymous02/11/13

too short....

make your stories longer. they are good though.

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by Anonymous02/11/13

author

Did you say what you wanted to say?
Did you ramble on and on and bore anyone?
Are you happy with the final story?
If so then the story is just right (Write?) snicker
Do it your way.
As Anonymous so I don't get 1 bombed

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by Drbeamer333302/24/13

Is he sending mixed signals, or letting her know that the sky's the limit?

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by Anonymous03/30/13

Just mindless drivel by a halfwit.

One of the worst! "1*" !!!!

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by Anonymous04/09/13

It got me off

Exciting series - lets have her properly gangbanged... :-)

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by devilspy200108/20/13

Ramble

Way to fast. No character development. What do you do with the pictures? Why are you surprised that the stud blew his load in your wife? Come on, slow down and write. There is far more you are not explaining.

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