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by Anonymous

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by Sid060402/05/13

Thank you

Another great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

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by bruce2202/05/13

Nice, light, enjoyable story

I guess I would classify it as a lovely fantasy. I'm cynical....

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by Anonymous02/05/13

Romance

Lovely story. Non-erotic, yes, but Romance would have been more appropriate.

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by Anonymous02/05/13

Feelgood Factor

It's nice once in a while to read something that makes you feel warm inside.
My wife and I both enjoyed your story very much.We both hope that you will carry on writing in this vein.

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by DG Hear02/05/13

DG Hear

Thank you for the nice comments. They are always appreciated. It makes a writer feel good when readers take the time to respond to a story. Even if sometimes they may be on the negative side. Oh! Happy Valentine's day to you.
With Respect
DG

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by hodunk02/05/13

What a great Story!

Thank You DG for another one of your best! I love your writing and look forward to what's next. You are the best. hodunk

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by northlander02/05/13

Thanks DG

Thanks for a warm story about a romance between two ordinary people, who are satisfied with their lives, and not looking for the unattainable, Five stars

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by Mostera102/06/13

How nice!

This really moved well. Very good. A pleasure to read.

Thank you,
M1

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by Anonymous02/07/13

"I love you too Grandpa"

Darn, must be some allergies going on here too.

DG you did a nice job of building the characters and their interpersonal relationships, especially between the older and younger generations. Really enjoyed this Valentines Day story.

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by Anonymous02/07/13

Good Effort

Not perfect, a bit dry at times but it is much stronger than your other entries, therefore it gets the 5.

Watch the use of "I" to begin sequential sentences - it is somewhat grating to see it 3 or 4 times in a row.

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by Anonymous02/08/13

Not a dry eye in the house

A damned good story, DG. Well told and with a better point than many.
HP

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by Anonymous02/14/13

Nice very nice

Nice to read A good old fashion romantic story thanks

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by Anonymous02/15/13

Wow...

Wonderful!!!!! 5*s

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by chytown03/07/13

Very Heart Warming Story****

Thanks for sharing I like your style!!

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by teach196503/11/13

Another 5 star submission!

Lotsa allergies around here too!

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by sweetandspicy4704/12/13

Heartwarming and enjoyable.
You could have based Ben's character on my own father...you have described him exactly as he was.
Thank you.
Five stars.

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by Anonymous07/28/13

Priceless

I enjoyed reading a true believable story experience.

I admit, I cried for the sadness but also for the happiness that was expressed.

Continue your great work.

Success

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by Tavadelphin05/12/14

Allergies in spring time are to be expected -

It is that time of year here LOL

Well done and totally believable - no big surprises but romance is not always about surprise but about people and happiness.

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by Anonymous07/17/14

Need an industrial size bottle of Claritin

My allergies were in full bloom as I was reading this story. Another great piece of work. Thank you.

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