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erectus123erectus123about 11 years agoAuthor
vulgar and crude perhaps but true

life throws this stuff at us all the time, never under estimate the love of one sibling for another...or the callousness of one who swaps his sister to attain his own sexual desires

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Bro's Gay but

Sis is Hetero ??!! Aah well we get all sorts of Curves thrown by Life !!

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Glory Juice unplugged....

I must admit I enjoyed the journey on the staircase...... His Sister must be one hot lady..... But then, your premise is spot on..... There are times in life when circumstances and opportunity alter perspective..... Really liked the lines,

"And fill her cunt with glory juice

Until it slops out of her sluice" Golden!

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