All Comments on 'The bitch is a tease'

by freakyfreaky469

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freakyfreaky469freakyfreaky469about 11 years agoAuthor

Inspired by true events. Every week at the store by my house comes this bitch, all dressed up like the grocery store is where to wear your finest garb. I watch as she turns heads, though she, unlike the bitch in the poem, seems mostly unaware though, doesn't seem to notice the men following her...once I saw her in an almost sheer tee shirt, a lovely coral color, no bra...could barely stop myself from throwing her down and fucking her in the candy aisle.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
What? No Camel Toes!

Your observations are spot on as I think all the main grocery stores have their resident 'tease'..... A few of the rhymes are a stretch but the story line and content were fun to read and review. Thanks for sharing.

lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years ago
I can't get this line out of my head...

"on the hunt, with her cunt, and cart of bananas" it's been in there for days. Thanks a lot.

weepingangel88weepingangel88about 11 years ago
Nicely done!

The words keep running through my head. Caught up in the haze... Does she find what she seaks or continue to leave tongues wagging in a daze?

I enjoy reading your poetry. Thank you for sharing!

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