by Serenitys
That was passionate. Well done for your debut story. Are we going to find out who he is or are we to be left guessing?
Would love a passionate encounter like that.
Well done - look forward to you next story!!!
BK Jenx
This is so hot... You meet the guy, and it is immediate! He is in your room, and then he is in you so fast... I can relate, Serenity... Loved every minute of this! - Jason (-:
great build up to a very erotic story
hope to see more from you in the future
Very well written Serenity with just the right amount of description of the encounter. I enjoyed your story immensely and hope you write more.
I couldn't stop reading. If in fact this had pages, I would have surely been turning pages. Very well written.
Had my breath held for most of this story, only breathing out when strictly necessary! Beautiful writing, passionate, instense and sensual, I imagine the writer of this story to be the same. Look forward to many more such works Serenitys.
The story has great descriptions and I really like how passionate the characters are.