All Comments on 'Mounting Urges'

5-ed .

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this is how the lines are read:

she's soon to be enjoyed By eyes that watch her nakedness:

the slide of his gaze makes her blush;

he has deployed A look of such discernment;

what he is doing is employing a device called enjambment, what it can do is add emphasis to the important rhyme like carousing/ arousing.

certainly arousing,eh

He generally does it well

in case some of you didn't know that