All Comments on 'The Willing Cup'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
O to Cup the marbled Nether Globes

of the Willin' Cup in firm Masterful Grip !! Nirvana !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I like it

Could be improved upon, but solid, at the core.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
I 5ed

but you are leading with the first line,

um, I think your friend (DM) tried to shame me about not being Cartesian

"pours demands" was a minor surprise

Question for you, is there anything below the surface of this, it looks both linear and one dimensional, and within the code rather flat. True this brew is not my taste, but I fived for craft. And it did not look like a walk through.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
a beautiful metaphor....

I enjoyed your metaphoric journey of being the vessel waiting to be filled with the brewing knowledge that continues to fill and fulfill your soul..... Again, thanks for sharing.

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