All Comments on 'The Diary of a Lost Kitten Ch. 01'
by Dancingwizard
- 5 Comments
Anonymousabout 11 years agoQuite a promising start to what I hope will be a long story! I like that it's written from Kitten's standpoint (and the fact she's adamant about who and what she is and isn't). I can also see how this story could branch into the tech's views on species modifications and her future owner as well.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThe bare bones of my "comment" is? are?--that in "Jersey Girl"--my favorite version by Tom Waits--
the man is in love with a beautiful, elegant, gentle, rich butter fat, Jersey cow--it's about this--
when he says "cross the river to the Jersey side"... it's like crossing something like race, sex barrior that's not allowed, but he loves her--
"don't you know when my dreams come true, when I'm walking down the street with you ... my little angel gives me everything..."
It's like a forbidden love--love of a Jersey cow, the river between them and other parts of England--
"And I call your name--"
Anonymousabout 11 years agoand the sun, no moon of someone held between her horns
This is like a associative test--
endless
Anonymousabout 11 years agoand hide her away from the rest of the world."
She's a sacred goddess, and you fools don't recognize her.
