All Comments on 'Naughty Survey'

Quite a juvenile narrative, to be perfectly honest. The pacing, especially at the beginning, was far too fast to be considered realistic, and this is often a turn off for most readers. The story has quite a bit of potential, so I would definitely review it and perhaps reconsider the 'easiness' of Natasha about the whole situation.

I enjoyed this! I agree with the statement that it started too quickly...but the rest made up for it...I hope you write more! Thank you.

moved too fast. slow things down next time.