by hoo_hoo_boo
Brilliant, simple, loving, sensuous .... Great mix
Superbly written, I can't put into words how well written this is. I loved the sheer sensuality of this piece. It was romantic in it's own way and felt believable, real. Congratulations on a 5 star story.
Really well written short story. Very erotic and I loved it. 5 stars and added to my favourites.