All Comments on 'Trial 1717'

The rough male dominated sadistic sex/fantasies and ridiculously large cock don't appeal to me, but I did enjoy the plot.

Also, I think referring to the female genitalia as her "flower" so often was a bit weird.

I look forward to reading more about the experiment - what it is, whether their new hypothesis will prove correct or not and how that will affect the trials.

Make this into a series. I wan t to see Carmen lose it.

Different, but good. Did you add chapters to this? If not, why not? How many years ago did you write this? Sorry for all the questions. You should have kept writing.

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