by wickedbet
So basically this is a bdsm story with a kitten as an excuse to be posted here! Really ?
it shouldn't surprise me though since none of you show any respect. Their are people who can be bothered by stuff like this and thats why there are categories.
Kate
This isn't listed under BDSM, it's listed under nonhuman. There was no excuse for posting it. I wrote it for someone i love. If you don't like it, please move on without comment. Being rude is unnecessary. If you have some constructive criticism to share, by all means, i'm listening.
Ignore Anonymous, I liked this. Stores are allowed to mix categories. If they didn't they'd be boring. This though, parts of this were cute in a strange way. I liked it. ^-^ As far as constructive criticisms go, your tensing got somewhat weird in a few parts, and ended up a little confusing. Try and stick to one tense, and please, keep writing!
I kept going back and forth in my head that she was just a cat or a anthropomorphic cat-girl. Couldn't decide if she was cat-sized or human sized in my head. Very Confusing. Kinda hot. Definitely needs polishing, but good job