by coyote3k
This asshole has no redeeming qualities what-so-ever . He is not a dom just a sick bastard.
Cindy would be someone's daughter. This bastard deserves to be strung up by his balls, left to hang long enough for them to turn purple, then be cut down - by cutting off his package.
I found all 4 stories extremely funny, but unfortunately not arousing at all. Congratulations.
I very rarely comment if idont care for something. I read both noncon and bdsm this is noncon. Bdsm gives the sub all the power. She has no say what so ever in what's happening. I'm guessing given the choice she wouldleave. My advice move this to noncon it will be much better received.
And is about as wrong as pedophilia. That being said, it was an accurate depiction of an actual rape and none of the usual crap where the victim immediately becomes a submissive slut who only lives to cum. So for that I give you a 4/5.
More, please. Though, having hang ups about my own butt.. And bodily functions, those parts are just revolting. Brilliant. But revolting.
I'm no prude. I love the non-con section. But yeah, this crosses so many lines for me. It's the pure continued abuse of another human being - women being treated worse than an animal. That it actually happens makes it worse. We just saw how 3 young women in real life were held for 10 years as sex slaves. Some sickos cross the line from fantasy to reality. But for the life of me, why would anyone have this as a fantasy? It's got to be a deep seated hatred of women.
When I heard the reports from Cleveland about birthday cakes marking abduction day, I immediately thought of this story. It is sitting very badly at the moment.
Very unnerved by it.
Your bio says you have an interest in bdsm and by the story it is obvious you have some knowledge in the subject. You have solid writing skills. Why don't you craft a bdsm story without the noncon element? I think you could create strong scenes people would respond to positively. You just need the right story to place them in.
You have written an excellent story that gives good insight into the mind of someone who needs to be killed or castrated on sight. I find it very interesting for that reason. I'm trying to write a story with a sexually abusive villain and this is helping me a lot. Since I have difficulty comprehending this kind of behavior, I've been having a lot of difficulty with getting this character right.
So thanks. This is very helpful. I'm quite serious, thanks for your help, this is brilliant.