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Intrusion: Roleplay v. Reality

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by Anonymous05/10/13

i like it.

The shadow is very good and does its job. My only nicpic is he looks a bit thick at the hips without more definition of both leg creases. Perhaps some shadowing there, if you don't want to get 'full frontal.' Maybe trim down but bubble his butt a bit more? I really do like it. Just trying to give honest, and hopefully helpful, personal impression.

Looking forward to more story and more images.

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