All Comments on 'Alice's Film Fantasy'

Wow, this was a great story to read! I loved the sweetness and the unexpected twists. I'll look forward to reading more of your work.

One small suggestion: please do consider asking someone to proofread/edit your work for things like spelling, grammar, and so forth. Everyone needs to have their work proofread and edited, so that it really gets that final polish it deserves.

Cheers! Keep writing!!

This was a really good story I enjoyed it a lot thank you

I thought this was beautiful and extremely well written. I would totally buy a book from you if you were a writer. The romance was so sweet. Thank you for writing this masterpiece! :)

Didn't think an erotic story could be so heartfelt and romantic.

This brought tears to my eyes. Beautifully written! You made both their love and the distance between them convincing.