All Comments on 'Penny's First Time'

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Cookielove04Cookielove04almost 11 years ago

Damn shit if thats how them party goes i want to go to one my pussy is wet as hell just reading this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Decent plot line, but the writing needs a LOT of editing... very choppy, very hard to keep track of who's doing what, who's in the room, what the timeline is. Potential, but need some work.

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